Originally Posted by
ForteNightshade
Perhaps what stands out the most though is how utterly irrelevant everyone else feels. Ask yourself if you replaced any one of these characters, including the WoL, with anyone else. Would it make a difference? Now before anyone jumps on about "this is like ARR!!" or whatnot. I'm completely fine with our character taking something of a backseat. There's a way to write that type of story and us still feel relevant though. Maybe if we weren't recruited into the Rites immediately but rather had to deal with each of the siblings ourselves before throwing our lot in with Wuk Lamat and mentoring her, it might work. However, the route they've chosen makes the WoL feel not like a new adventure in a new land but rather a tagalong in Wuk Lamat's story. We're the side NPC yet with less characterization; that random guard handing a missive to Hien rather than Hien himself.
And that makes for a very unengaging, and ultimately, boring "adventure." At least so far. I really want to believe it gets better in the second half.