Notice how stilted OP's lyrics seem, yet they convey the same meaning as the ones you posted? I found this curious, so I looked at yours and OP's sources and simply put the Japanese lyrics into a machine translator. TL;DR OP's lyrics are just a really literal translation of the japanese lyrics, while yours are the cleaned up version. If you actually read them though, the meaning is basically the same.
https://i.imgur.com/9lXhP2A.png
So bizarre how much hate an in depth character analysis is getting, while threads about coffee and lalafell chairs are met with applause. But it is the official forums, I suppose.
