Dunno what you mean. I'm a ray of sunshine. Reflected from the blade of a guillotine. :)
Yeah, I also know if you put too much chile in your tacos you're bound to have a bad time (not from personal experience, mind you).
You know a thing that can break your "immersion"? Stopping to re-read a sentence multiple times before moving on. Having hiccups in your story and having it harder to swallow than it needs to be.
