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    Mermentia Forevea
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    Limsa Lominsa, Docks -- Text -- Ahldskyf's Missing Word -- "not my ever-doubtful"

    When the player is in the Ferry Docks in Limsa Lominsa and speaks to Ahldskyf to begin the "Letting Out Orion's Belt" sidequest, the following text appears:

    "
    Ahldskyf: A flawless plan, one would
    think. Ah, but not my ever-doubtful
    patron. Can you guess what his
    eloquent retort was? "What if the
    bread tastes of shite?"
    "

    This is incorrect because the sentence "Ah, but not my ever-doubtful patron" does not seem to be the proper phrasing. It seems as though this line is missing the word "to".

    Please fix this issue by adding "to" before "my" on the second line.

    The corrected text would read as follows:

    "
    Ahldskyf: A flawless plan, one would
    think. Ah, but not to my ever-doubtful
    patron. Can you guess what his
    eloquent retort was? "What if the
    bread tastes of shite?"
    "
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    Aria Placida
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mermentia View Post
    When the player is in the Ferry Docks in Limsa Lominsa and speaks to Ahldskyf to begin the "Letting Out Orion's Belt" sidequest, the following text appears:

    "
    Ahldskyf: A flawless plan, one would
    think. Ah, but not my ever-doubtful
    patron. Can you guess what his
    eloquent retort was? "What if the
    bread tastes of shite?"
    "

    This is incorrect because the sentence "Ah, but not my ever-doubtful patron" does not seem to be the proper phrasing. It seems as though this line is missing the word "to".

    Please fix this issue by adding "to" before "my" on the second line.

    The corrected text would read as follows:

    "
    Ahldskyf: A flawless plan, one would
    think. Ah, but not to my ever-doubtful
    patron. Can you guess what his
    eloquent retort was? "What if the
    bread tastes of shite?"
    "
    Hmm. . . I see your point, but I'm reading it as "One would think so, but my ever-doubtful patron wouldn't." Seems to me like either option would be valid (the current, or your proposed change).
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    Moderator Xophious's Avatar
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    Greetings you two!

    As Viridiana previously said, it all depends on how you read it. But we'll gladly forward the concern in case they think otherwise! Any updates will be posted up on the forum once they become available. Thanks!
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