The Night Before Early Access

[ceresletos]

No offence or anything, this was quite well done. The only thing is you missed a key ending. As it is now it feels like an afterthought. The only change I would make would be from this:

Tomorrow I wake refreshed and renewed
Final Fantasy XIV:ARR this is my ode toward you.

to this:

I lay down my body broken and worn
For tomorrow I wake in this Realm Reborn

No offense at all and thanks for your input. I actually wrote this as a fun thing in 3 separate sittings (before work and on break) and after it was originally posted as it really did not have an ending so in truth it was afterthought to finish it. My original thought was just a few verses then to have others add their own, but I kept on adding to it. haha. I will say I do like your much better and will ask to have Sod update it with credit to you.

[SodRansom]

Updated Thanks Cedri!

[Pwnagraphic]

See?! There's always at least one of these xD

[Cedri]

As a fellow author and poet, I am honored.

[Dynamis]

bumping because everyone should read this

[Nejikun4]

What times early access start for Eastern Time, does anyone know?

[ThunderCat]

What times early access start for Eastern Time, does anyone know?

5.5 hrs so get some sleep. (5 am)

[Pofo]

That was absolutely amazing, thank you for sharing this!

[SneakyCastro]

Outstanding!

[EmiriiMei]

Cutee ^_^

Character level too low to make a new post!? We shal fix that soon!