I think this article works great to initiate interest for people who don't follow XIV news at all. Short and to the point, they identified many of the big issues widely known for ver 1.0 and told people how SE worked to directly fix them. Hopefully this article will make them read up more on ARR through longer, more detailed articles elsewhere. The "So, if you buy FFXIV:ARR on PS3, you'll also get a PC copy" line is the only flag that really jumped out at me for being blatantly wrong, but other than that, hopefully this'll reel in some new players!