Ok, I will start this by saying that I liked Dawntrail story bits. Especially the beginning portion was really carefully crafted, but as the story progressed I started to notice some incredibly agonizing parts about characters I thought I knew and the story.
I wrote 40 pages of notes going through the story, so I really tried to understand what was going on. And a lot of it is about the latter portion due to the complicated nature of what's going on, so sit tight as I try to break this down and tell you why this is problematic by nature. Heavy spoilers ahead:
So first I will highlight the problem and we go about it by breaking it down why it's quite literally the dumbest piece of fictions.
Essentially the crew that joins the WoL into the Unlost World; Erenville, Wuk Lamat, G'raha Tia, Krile cause a genocide just because of their beliefs of what is "correct".
Now I have to explain why this is so and it isn't going to be simple, but bare with me.
From the very start when we learn about the "regulator" devices there is apprehension among the crew in Heritage Found that this is a bit abnormal to take a soul of a person and divide it into a soul and a memory, after which the soul goes through a purifying process to be used as a supplemental soul for the living.
Alisaie stating that this is highly unnatural and doesn't like it. Souls being used as commodity instead of it naturally going to the Aetherial Sea where it slowly fades into oblivion.
The thing that the crew from here on keep mentioning is that people are remembered by others as they die and that THAT'S how it SHOULD be. And there is very little in terms of trying to understand this new reflections beliefs. Even if they too know about the Aetherial Sea and how it functions.
So there is a direct conflict here immediately from the crew that something isn't right about this. And yes the Preservation in Solution Nine was doing experiments with souls, injecting them into beasts and creatures, but this again is never explained to the minute detail on how purified these souls are, cause if they are just blank soul energy, there is no inherit wrong doing even if you put that soul into a beasts body. (As far as we know)
"We are more than our memories" I hear everyone scream. Yes, even I believe that every human is more than their memories, but I'm not going to push that onto others as the truth. It would be incredibly naive of me to do that, as if I knew any better?
Especially onto people who have different belief systems they've lived by for hundreds of years.
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