Positive Dawntrail Narrative Feedback Thread

[DarkMasamune]

Didn't like most of the MSQ, but I did enjoy Mamook, Bakool Ja Ja's redemption (althought a cliché, I enjoyed it, the story was touching), the dungeons were really nice and the mechanics were original and fun.

The scenery is quite nice and I enjoyed the little callbacks to FFIX (the Yan in neons in Solution 9, I thought they were absolutely adorables, and I'm sure there are more that I missed).

Also props to lil Gulool Ja. He's cute.

Edit : Oh and Koana got to be a bro by the end and I loved that. He didn't stand out that much in the beginning but I really liked him by the end.

[RabendaShin]

Didn't like most of the MSQ, but I did enjoy Mamook, Bakool Ja Ja's redemption (althought a cliché, I enjoyed it, the story was touching), the dungeons were really nice and the mechanics were original and fun.

The scenery is quite nice and I enjoyed the little callbacks to FFIX (the Yan in neons in Solution 9, I thought they were absolutely adorables, and I'm sure there are more that I missed).

Also props to lil Gulool Ja. He's cute.

Edit : Oh and Koana got to be a bro by the end and I loved that. He didn't stand out that much in the beginning but I really liked him by the end.

Completely agree with you, especially on the Bakool Ja Ja part. Cliché's can work when used correctly, though I would have enjoyed a bit more emotional development from the point he ran away crying.

Some speeches from the antagonists were also quite gripping, such as Zoraal Ja stating "You ask a lost man for the way", or Sphene deciding to no longer be an overprotective queen and take action instead.
Though looking back their writing may have seemed better because of the drivel Wuk Lamat spouted 24/7 about peace and food and friendship.