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    Malthir Durnith
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    Dawntrail plot is not chill low stake, but it's pacing is and that's why it's bad

    For all those who are saying well of course it's slow paced this is the chill expac getting away from the idea of saving the world etc. The problem with that, is we aren't chilling, from minute 1 we are helping decide the future of a continent, by what marker is that chill or relaxing?

    If they wanted chill it should have been:

    We arrive with Wuk and Krile, to relax and help Krile etc, Wuk never mentions a leadership campaign. Wuk likes partying with the people and cultures and she takes us around to the different groups, instead of 900 longwinded info dumb cutscenes, we should have been doing solo duties with mini game type things learning about those cultures. For example, lama racing up the hills with the traders (literally just re skin the chocobo racing minigame), then solo another duty where we're on the back of a cart protecting the barrels of goods from waves of mobs while it's going down the path etc. Have us do surfing minigame and other beach themed solo duties with lore involved so as a player we feel involved in the story. We learn that Wuk loves her people and spends time with them. Have her not interested in the leadership race because she would rather spend time with her people than on a throne. Starting her as a fun loving and caring goofball. Then slowly have us cross paths with the leadership race, basically the same interactions with 2 twin headed heel etc. Then slowly due to the second arc of the game Wuk realises that if she truly cares for her people she needs to help them, take responsibilities and fight for the sake of her people.

    See that's an Arc it's character progression, I'm not a good writer, I'm sure there are plenty of people that could come up with something better. But even then that shows my point the writing is so flawed.

    Instead what was delivered is an incredibly important functionally high stake story, stretched out and delivered at a slow pace, by just info dumping us massive backstory lore of a group of people, in a constant stream of long winded cutscenes. Wuk is a mary sue instead of a well written character, she's immature, constantly makes mistakes and can never truly grow as a character because even with all her flaws everyone always responds to her as if she was right and amazing and she always wins in the end, just get a powerup out of no where cause Wuk. it doesn't feel like and adventure or holiday, it feels like I've been sent back to school to be talked down to and sat in the corner listening to other people for the next 100 hours.
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    Last edited by Malthir; 07-01-2024 at 10:38 PM.

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    Mr_Gyactus's Avatar
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    Rugiada Brightdawn
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    ... and who play that kind of ... thing?

    I tried some "social MMO", it was so bad I had to hot-swap and burn the ssd, because it was the only way to avoid infecting the whole PC.
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    I have 10,000 needles,
    I'm not a weaver,
    and I'm not scared to use them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Malthir View Post
    The problem with that, is we aren't chilling, from minute 1 we are helping decide the future of a continent, by what marker is that chill or relaxing?
    The marker of defeating what is essentially the devil on the moon, then god, then flying to the edge of the universe and defeating the source of the end of all existence? Going into a political dispute is just Tuesday for the WoL.
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    Last edited by Cabalabob; 07-01-2024 at 11:31 PM.
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    The anonymity of the internet is what leads people to become jerks online.

    You could make a game where all you did was run through fields of flowers holding hands and you'd still get a guy telling you you're doing it wrong.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mcshiggs View Post
    Everyone knows you skip through fields of flowers holding hands, running noobs need to go back to WoW.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cabalabob View Post
    The marker of defeating what is essentially the devil on the moon, then god, then flying to the edge of the universe and defeating the source of the end of all existence? Going into a political dispute is just Tuesday for the WoL.
    You seem to be missing the point, it's still high stakes, it's basically exactly the same as Stormblood, continent at war. That's not lower stakes, that's not relaxed or a random adventure, we are basically dumped into a political intrigue campaign without any dog in the fight in the first place, which is one of the other reasons why Wuk is so unlikable, outside of her character being poorly written. We are basically dragged straight into being a campaigner for her political career for no good reason, basically, just cause. It's the same as before without a shadowy cabal only this time, we're a background character that has no impact in the story what so ever.
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    Last edited by Malthir; 07-02-2024 at 12:22 AM.

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    Reimu Hakurei
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    Quote Originally Posted by Malthir View Post
    You seem to be missing the point, it's still high stakes, it's basically exactly the same as Stormblood, continent at war. That's not lower stakes, that's not relaxed or a random adventure, we are basically dumped into a political intrigue campaign without any dog in the fight in the first place, which is one of the other reasons why Wuk is so unlikable, outside of her character being poorly written. We are basically dragged straight into being a campaigner for her political career for no good reason, basically, just cause. It's the same as before without a shadowy cabal only this time, we're a background character that has no impact in the story what so ever.
    I mean, "low" or "high" stakes are relative terms.

    Compared to defeating the embodiment of universal despair and absolute entropy, effectively stopping it from erasing the entire universe, a mere continent is quite literally insignificant.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Remilia_Nightfall View Post
    I mean, "low" or "high" stakes are relative terms.

    Compared to defeating the embodiment of universal despair and absolute entropy, effectively stopping it from erasing the entire universe, a mere continent is quite literally insignificant.
    While that's true it's hardly a holiday esque chilled expansion, nor is it adventure, you're not adventuring when you're being led around by the nose. So it fails in both regards, I posted it in another thread, but now I'm at the end of the story I've come to realise,
    The entire plot of this expac is a poor attempt of a copy of the first arc of Stormblood with the last act of Shadowbringer, Sphene story line is literally a budget emmet.
    Our PC has no reason to be here, no reason to do any of this, as I said before it's not like we're on adventure, we're essentially a political campaigner for a character we've just met. We don't go off the beaten track discover new things, just get led around like a lap dog.
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    Last edited by Malthir; 07-02-2024 at 06:23 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cabalabob View Post
    The marker of defeating what is essentially the devil on the moon, then god, then flying to the edge of the universe and defeating the source of the end of all existence? Going into a political dispute is just Tuesday for the WoL.
    What i was really disappointment in was, how we were seen as a thread, but never had an moment were someone did something to upset us and just some angry gaze of us sends that one shivering... showing how we're vastly stronger then any of them but just hold back to not interfere too much...

    Though it was funny when they talked about how the Mamol-ja got the beaten so hard on Eorzea and we just smile and nod *instert captain kirk meme*
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    Remember Ishgard? Ala Mhigo? The Nadaam? Doma?
    The only difference here is that there isn't more at stake.
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    Basteala Thayne
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    Dawntrail has some "ARR Syndrome" in the beginning of the expansion--that I won't deny.

    It absolutely picks up after you hit up the third zone, and imo is well worth it. It's just whether you want to wait that long.
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    Shara Dei-ji
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    There's actually way more at stake here than SB but the pacing is inexplicably bad. The final zone in particular had me just shaking my head with the 'hey, let's take it easy for a while and get to know some people' vibe they tried to sell and it just doesn't work imo. It worked for the first half of the expansion due to the plot but it feels really out of place in the 2nd half.
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