Male Au Ra Feedback - Eye/Lip Fix

[raiisuu]

Adding on some gifs with edits that hopefully demonstrate what could be done.





As it can (hopefully) be seen in the gifs above, I primarily darkened the eyebrows to match the shade of the hair (and removed the little curve at the end of the eyebrows), lessened the shadow inside of the whites of the eyes, and made the curves of the edges of the lips more subtle (expression above is simper). I also made the pupil a little bigger on the second image, as I did notice that it's small size made my character have a "crazed" expression.