heavensword: rewriten

[Renalt]

My guess was the Chocobo was Meteion.

[Reaver1236]

I love you, Reaver. Don't listen to the haters, baby!

thank you XD my heavensword rewriten give more inspire to developers :3c

[Knot_D]

Still better than Aveyond's story

[Renalt]

thank you XD my heavensword rewriten give more inspire to developers :3c

Let us know when you start working on Stormblood.

[fulminating]

Oh I thought this was gonna be a heavily-closeted and misogynistic aveyond take about how they need sexier men in their life and get these healer robes outta here those are for girls

Look there's nothing gay about having a topless lizard dude as your signature and wanting lots of strong manly men doing manly things. The cast is full of twerps, wanting just big stoic muscular guys doesn't necessarily mean anything.

[SassyAssassin]

Beautifully rewritten Reaver, definitely my favourite out of all the rewrites
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[Fyrebrand]

I'm normally not a fan of all the troll posts on these forums, but this... this is a thing of beauty. I respect this.

The only thing missing is an interdimensional rift opening up, and out of it falls a young man with a neckbeard named Gary Stu. The Scions ask where he's from, and he tells them he comes from a land called "Earth." Y'shtola asks if such a magnificent male specimen such as him has a girlfriend back home. He says no, he is not popular with females on his homeworld, but Y'shtola winks and says "I find that hard to believe." Gary joins the Scions on their adventures, and even though he's never had any martial arts training before he just happens to be naturally gifted at fighting and casting magic!

Throughout the story, every female character hits on Gary and he sleeps with them once each, but ultimately decides that he is loyal to his bae Y'shtola. Somewhere around the mid-point of Shadowbringers Gary starts being described as a half-fox half-dragon, and it's not made clear how this happened, but the other characters acknowledge and accept his fursona as if it has always existed. After Endwalker, Gary and Y'shtola settle down on their island paradise and sire several children: Gary Jr., Naoki, Khaleesi, Sora, Noctis, Boruto, etc.

Just when it seems like things have calmed down and Gary and Y'shtola can live a quiet life, another interdimensional rift opens up. Out steps a man in red robes, with an eyepatch over one eye and carrying an enormous greatsword. "My name is Auron," he says ominously. "Gary, you are needed in my homeworld of Spira. This... is your story."

To be continued....????

[ronibosch]

Somewhere around the mid-point of Shadowbringers Gary starts being described as a half-fox half-dragon, and it's not made clear how this happened, but the other characters acknowledge and accept his fursona as if it has always existed.

I like the inclusion of this, as well as the WoL being pushed to the wayside in their own story by Gary Stu. Just...*chef's kiss*

thank you XD my heavensword rewriten give more inspire to developers :3c

You're welcome! xD

[Renalt]

So...when is the Stormblood rewrite?