Thread: Review of 6.3 Story Content

@SassyAssassin
Dam right she would!!! But... I think either the WoL or Hien would need to be there to help keep Magnai from getting into yet another one of he and Sadu's endless battles, so he'll actually take in what she says both throughly and thoughtfully. xD

That would add even more to the hilarity! I'm not sure if Magnai can read Eorezan, so Urianger of all people attempting to translate a book like that to Magnai would be peak hilarious! Especially if Urianger becomes embarassed himself while having to reading something like a book to get waifus. xD

@Knot_D

It might have been for the best. Magnai might had a massive nosebleed if he saw the two of them frolicking in the ocean in nothing but their swimsuits. x3

Welp, having played through 6.3 at last, I have to say...

The hate is pretty overblown. It's not great. Compared to even previous "middle of the story" patches, such as 3.2, 4.2-4.4, and 5.2, it's probably not in the upper half for me. But it wasn't terrible.

The writing surrounding Zero is all kinds of hamfisted, mind you. And they really overdid it with the hat tipping—it's cute once in a while, but doing it 1-2 times per conversation is excessive. But I like her. I like stories about hurt or broken people learning to live again. There's something genuinely sweet about it.

I also would've appreciated the writers not shafting the nuance in Rubicante's motive immediately, and instead letting it simmer for a while. And to be frank, the entire "Why is Azdaja in Garlemald? Why did Cagnazzo say his work was done when he died? Oh lol it was all a trap." thing was kind of an idiot plot. The worst part about it is that you could have all the exact same story beats without the Scions collectively sharing one brain cell.

Step One: Have the characters discuss Azdaja's sudden appearance in more detail. Have them recall that moving physical bodies through voidgates is nigh impossible if the gate is too small.
Step Two: Have them conclude that either a massive voidgate must exist in Garlemald, putting the entire region and indeed the whole world in jeopardy, or a much smaller piece of Azdaja had been passed through a more familiar-sized voidgate. Such as, say, one of her eyes. Either way, they will still need to investigate, but at least this way they aren't stumbling into an obvious trap.
Step Three: When Cagnazzo lets slip that his death achieved something, have the characters discuss this and realize the obvious: This was a distraction. But getting back to Thavnair is not immediately possible—they have no aetheryte access in this remote a place. They can send advance warning to Thavnair that something is amiss, but...
Step Four: The efforts to stop Rubicante's entrance into the Source would obviously be met with failure. This could then lead into the reveal of Rubicante's character by having him destroy the voidgate, but not harm the guards when he escaped.

Edit: Also, the end of the last quest is in line with my "idiot plot" complaint. We just came back from encountering a voidgate, opened through the use of a dragon's eye, in a place where doing so is significantly easier than elsewhere. At the very least, that should be the first thing the characters suggest, if only to refute it as a possibility.

Originally Posted by aveyond-dreams

I suppose I differ in that I definitely know that I and many others could easily provide a better story than what we got in Endwalker. Apart from my own rewrite which can be found here there have been multiple ones that have expanded upon and fleshed out territories such as Nhalmasque, the northern parts of Thavnair, etc.

We have think about this long time. Mistake is to rewrite old story. The Ayywalking it is stale. Rewrite it no point. Forum chara no longer have the interest. Now the Ayybeyond is only Ehhbeyond. Even story writer is make the food meme about it. Answer it is to rewrite new story. Is not rewrite is prewrite. This make course correct strong. We are guild lead and producer so we can give the outline.

Patch 64
It start with the Pandamen. Scientist Cloudian Strife is reincarnate Lahee. He is remember the past now from Crystal Memory. Reason Cloudian/Lahee is the simpythizer for Athens is because Athens was the twin. Twin sister of the Athens is evil Venar. Lahee is kill Athens but the Venar it escape Crystal Memory with the evil Loprabbit. Venar it has kill Alan in Elpis but reincarnate chara is escape. End of Pandamen.

Patch 65
Gomez is on moon. He say at last my plan it fulfill. He take of helmet. Surprise it is Svelte Empress Lana of Rosaria. She is descendent of God King Solus when he have forbid love with the Merlywhirble. She has the blond blue cyrilic feature with the 50% No Shadow and the 50% Garlemalding and the 50% Roedyne and the 100% muscle and the 100% mary sue. Is to reinforce traditional masculine value. Chara is design base the Quina Quen accept with the black cloth. She break the helmet like the Sylvanus and it creating the Vortex that bring all world together. She say welcome to Shadowland of 13. Is final rejoin that bring back No Shadow God and destroy all shard. Scallion is party with the cheesie burger but suddenly have block artery. All Chara is die and go to Shadowland.

Patch 70
Scallion of 7 is sad because it has lost. Chara it can not be found and all Alan shard from other world is run around pretend to be the Alan. Chara must find and assasin the Alan shard and their familys to make Alan soul into No Shadow God. It make the new fantasia update with the pretty face. Now come back to the Scallion. To survive must go to Rosaria. In Rosaria they meeting the Spanish design chara of the Cid call Al Cid. Al Cid meet The Cid and they can not decide who is real Cid. So is rejoin to form Roedyne Big Cid. Big Cid is turning to Alphanod and Alise and say what is ideal government. They say democracy. Big Cid he punch them and say wrong fascism is ideal. Czar and high priest ruler is ok too as long as is dark chocolate fantasy medevil theme. Twins is cry because realize they have wasting the money on polisci degree when could have work at the burger king. So go to gym to bulk and become the Levilarge twin. Scallions team up with Emperess to find the Venar who has escape to bowels of Dalamad Subterrain with the cheesie burger. Was eaten by dogo Dalamad. So Scallion use mini spell to enter dogo. Inside they is fighting the Loprabbit. When get to stomach walls it close in. Twin Alphilarge and Aligains put back together and say we will push wall you must escape to fight the Venar. Then rest of Scallion it die to stomach acid. Except for the Einstein and the Grahad who rejoining into the No Shadow God. Alan shed tear but it must go alone. In final chamber meeting the Venar. You have done well to come here but you will die. Alan summon spirit of Solus and Elibuss and Lahee and is transform into the No Shadow. Is use the magic to summon God Meteo who kill Venar and Loprabbit. Alan then it choose to fall asleep from the boredom.

500 year in future the race of Dalamads come run to the vegita cover ruin of Garlemalding. Smallest find a tree and push out the sleeping Alan. Below the Garlemalding is underwater city of Atlantis where No Shadow God live again under Svelte Empress Lana. Is go to credit splash The Endzinger.

Sequel is the MMORPG Final Fantasy X-2IV where is bring back boyfiend Solus to the Alan and go on the road trip with Lahee and Elibuss. Chara can only pick the No Shadow God because all other chara is die.