Quote Originally Posted by aveyond-dreams View Post
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This would have been more appropriate as a fanfiction submission to AO3. Please consider it for your next attempt.

I would probably have not read more than a chapter or two, though, because entire expansions before the story would have to be rewritten. I might not even have read the story at all if the tag "evil Venat" was included (and, believe me, if it was not included, you'd get a dressing down in the comments for omitting it).