This frequency of English localization issues is unacceptable

[Xirean]

I am struggling to see the difference you are trying to point out amid so many words. It all seems to say the same things in a slightly different way.

If you're referring to the OP's post. The EN line falsely attributes the forestalling of the final days to Venat/Hydaelyn and makes Zodiark sound bad or as though he directly caused destruction. The other line gives the credit of forestalling the final days to Zodiark and communicates concern over the misuse of Zodiark's power in the wrong hands.