What's the point with that quite lackluster story in Endwalker?

[BRVV]

Yeah because that was the whole focus of EW. Not everything else just Ultima Thule apparently.

Reads like "just because the ending sucks..."

We also don't judge the WHOLE expansion. If you want that experience than read those 700 pages completely if you really want that

[Carin-Eri]

Reads like "just because the ending sucks..."

We also don't judge the WHOLE expansion. If you want that experience than read those 700 pages completely if you really want that

Agreed - usually, even those who hated it seem to admit that there were a few standout moments. The sequence with Matsya and the baby is usually one such example.

[Ameela]

The story of endwalker is bad and incompetent written. It focused on trying to do 'emotional' moments (Ultima thul) instead of trying to wrap up stort elements correctly.

Either the devs never knew how they were going to end it, or the lead writer was an idiot who had no idea what was intended by those who came before.

SE, instead of focusing on poorly written fake outs and edgie drama, make sure it makes sense first.

Irregardless of the quality of EW's writing I find this to be a terrible PoV.
EVERY story needs an emotional core first and foremost before everything else is put into place.
If you're just writing stuff with nothing to get across the audience will leave with no lasting impression and nothing to resonate with, literally just passionless drivel designed to be consumed and thrown out of your mind the moment you finish it.

[RyuDragnier]

Irregardless of the quality of EW's writing I find this to be a terrible PoV.
EVERY story needs an emotional core first and foremost before everything else is put into place.
If you're just writing stuff with nothing to get across the audience will leave with no lasting impression and nothing to resonate with, literally just passionless drivel designed to be consumed and thrown out of your mind the moment you finish it.

Agreed. I feel the big problem here was how it was presented. It was the last zone, of course we knew they were copouts and how it was going to end. Had the script been written with us losing each Scion one by one after the Final Days started, somebody in Radz, somebody in Thavnair, somebody in Garlemald, Thancred's sacrifice, Estinien's sacrifice, and then culminating in losing the twins before the final walk, THAT would have made it hit even harder. Yes, them coming back would still be a bit of a cop out, but I think a lot of us would have accepted it a hell of a lot better.

[aveyond-dreams]

I feel the big problem here was how it was presented. It was the last zone, of course we knew they were copouts and how it was going to end. Had the script been written with us losing each Scion one by one after the Final Days started, somebody in Radz, somebody in Thavnair, somebody in Garlemald, Thancred's sacrifice, Estinien's sacrifice, and then culminating in losing the twins before the final walk, THAT would have made it hit even harder. Yes, them coming back would still be a bit of a cop out, but I think a lot of us would have accepted it a hell of a lot better.

Hard agree. What you've described is a more effective way to make it so that the story makes sense when they try to push the "tales of loss" bit, if only by virtue of the sacrifices lasting longer than 30 minutes. Some of these characters shouldn't come back, with those that do being able to take on more active roles in the future where we can see their arcs continue to progress.

[Vahlnir]

Agreed. I feel the big problem here was how it was presented. It was the last zone, of course we knew they were copouts and how it was going to end. Had the script been written with us losing each Scion one by one after the Final Days started, somebody in Radz, somebody in Thavnair, somebody in Garlemald, Thancred's sacrifice, Estinien's sacrifice, and then culminating in losing the twins before the final walk, THAT would have made it hit even harder. Yes, them coming back would still be a bit of a cop out, but I think a lot of us would have accepted it a hell of a lot better.

This would have been an excellent approach. I still would have said "dangit, I thought I was finally rid of at least one of them!" but it still would have been well played from a writing standpoint.

[Midareyukki]

This would have been an excellent approach. I still would have said "dangit, I thought I was finally rid of at least one of them!" but it still would have been well played from a writing standpoint.

Even I who don't necessarily want to be rid of any of them agree with Ryu there. Because the execution was just a mess imo. Okay, sure, you want to provide shock and tension in the last area, but it's so corny, what you're doing is so obvious that I couldn't quite take it seriously. And Y'shtola outright admitting there's a way to bring everyone back just makes me question why the sacrifices were added to begin with xD

[Vahlnir]

Even I who don't necessarily want to be rid of any of them agree with Ryu there. Because the execution was just a mess imo. Okay, sure, you want to provide shock and tension in the last area, but it's so corny, what you're doing is so obvious that I couldn't quite take it seriously. And Y'shtola outright admitting there's a way to bring everyone back just makes me question why the sacrifices were added to begin with xD

There really wasn't much point to any of it. Thancred's "death" was the one that was the least forced. If they were going to commit to one, that would have been the one to go with. I don't mind Thancred, but I think that would have been an excellent place and time to send him off. He would have gone down swinging. A good death for him as a character and a gunbreaker to boot.

[Boblawblah]

makes me question why the sacrifices were added to begin with xD

so you think that Ultima Thule would have had just as much weight if the Scions hadn't given themselves to fight despair to pave the way for the WoL to get to Metion? I can understand you not enjoying Ultima Thule, I can't understand you just out right ignoring the whole point of why they "sacrificed" themselves.

[Lustre]

Agreed. I feel the big problem here was how it was presented. It was the last zone, of course we knew they were copouts and how it was going to end. Had the script been written with us losing each Scion one by one after the Final Days started, somebody in Radz, somebody in Thavnair, somebody in Garlemald, Thancred's sacrifice, Estinien's sacrifice, and then culminating in losing the twins before the final walk, THAT would have made it hit even harder. Yes, them coming back would still be a bit of a cop out, but I think a lot of us would have accepted it a hell of a lot better.

This would've been much better, I agree. The entirety of UT felt hard to enjoy due to how transparent and fake the deaths were. "here's a device to bring us back, but dont use it hehe!!!" get real. Then the completely out of character moment from Emet. It didn't feel realistic in the context of everything that came before.

I disagree on the whole "storys need to be focused on emotion before anything else" take above the Ryu. When that happens, you get plots full of holes just to try and drag emotions out of the audience. It needs to make sense, logically, first and foremost, and then you can start adding layers of depth and intricates to incite said emotions. In context of XIV entire plot, it's like, a pretty good story that ebbs and flows in quality but is mostly rather consistent outside of a few areas, and then all of a sudden it's "LOOK AT THE SAD KITTEN AWWW" and a man in front of the stage raises a "Now Cry" sign in front of the audience. It just felt.... gross. I've said it a million times before but you can sum up EW in three words. "Convenient, Contrived, and Cheap".