I am not sure if this first one is an typo or not, but it appears to be:
When achieving 82 WHM, "Glare" and "Holy" are upgraded to "Glare III" and "Holy III". Should they not be "Glare II" and "Holy II"?

Also in the MSQ quest "Their Greatest Contribution" Emet-Selch states:
"Emet-Selch: That personal annoyance aside, Hermes's knowledge is undeniably impressive. Given that there are none among the Fourteen who specialize in the celestial, he would be a welcome edition." Edition should be "addition".