Rate My Drawing

[Caitlyn]

4. Grab yourself a pen tablet if you are into digital drawing, you don't have to go full piggy-bank-breaking model, many tablet without monitors are cheap and you can do great art with them. Don't bother with mouse unless you are going super heavy with OCD for perspective background field, mouse is just inferior for character drawing.

A drawing tablet wont make you better. I m getting much better (and faster) results by using my mouse ; )
And I can draw during my break at work >: D

It's fine if you don't like. Constructive criticism is very healthy to improve my drawing skills, you know?

Some critism I want to give here:
1. The "kiss" text doesnt fit. Only use text, if its a comic/manga. Everyone should know whats happening without the usage of texts.
2. The anatomy looks pretty wrong. The arms look to bulky or way too defined for a lalafall/tarutaru. And the face is a bit awkward.
3. The overall drawing/coloring-style is very static and artificial. You tried to let it look too perfect, but with so many mistakes and chaotic lines, it actually ruins the picture.
4. You re doing the typical beginners mistakes: solid black lines, white highlights, black shadows. The line should match the other colors, highlights are better in bright yellow, shadows are more in dark blue/purple. But never just white and black!
5. To many lines and stuff for the pink blanket/pillow/background. Same goes for the hair. Better keep the image simple, so people wont get flooded with unneccessary details.

Sorry, 2 of 10 from me here.


Some tips from a random pseudo-artist here:

1. Do your lineart by using wild sketches. It doesnt need to be 100% perfect. And most important: dont force anything!
2. Look at your lineart from distance. If you think there something wrong, there is. Another good method is to mirror the image. It shouldnt look worse when mirroring it.
3. Less is more. Dont try to be overly detailed. It doesnt need a fancy background or excessive lighting. Most good pictures are simple.
4. Dont trace/copy. Art theft is a no go.
5. When learning to draw, try something simple first. Baby steps.
6. Keep practising.