2/10.

> There’s no solid light direction. At all.
> Pillow shading
> Zero line weight variation - this can look good in certain styles, but not with this
> Overly detailed hair, with almost no details anywhere else
> Very wonky anatomy
> Random highlights? That don’t serve a purpose and look out of place on the piece.
> Animal nose on the lalafell(?) for no apparent reason.
> Uninteresting colors and zero dynamic posing. I fall into the mistake myself of thinking a pose is dynamic when it’s static, so don’t feel discouraged. All it takes is more practice.