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[Strongfat900]

Let's rate, then.

Technique: Colours are ok, very basic, mostly flats as they are. Heavy detailing of their hair makes those parts look needlessly busy.
You probably do not want to draw our attention to their hair because there is something special about that, but because it looks cool like that.
Your lineart could benefit from letting the thickness of your lines vary. As it is, the prominent details of their hair and outlines of their limbs, for example, are all about the same thickness. What I'm getting at is that hair, as thing would look better if you detailed it with lighter strokes. You have already used something like that in their hairs' finer details.

Anatomy: While their faces look cute which fits to them being couple of Tarutaru/Lalafell characters, the human-like definition of their bodies/muscles creates contrast which I personally find jarring to look at.
The pale one's arm looks disproportionately thick.

Layout and posing: Obviously it is fairly closeup drawing of these characters, so the composition is ok, and so is the posing. Not the most interesting composition, but it communicates the genera idea ok.

Thanks for the comment. Yeah, because I figured that Lalafell's arms are a bit thiccer than other races. Hmm, you got a point in the human-like bodies. The thing is that I didn't use the Tarutatru and Lalafells for reference.