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    "International Relations" Kazagg Chah missing space/redundancy

    As the title suggests, there's a few errors in Kazagg Chah's dialogue in the quest "International Relations." For one thing, at the end of one of his sentences there is no space preceding the next sentence. I have outlined that in red. However, I believe the proper fix would be to simply remove the following three sentences entirely, since he is basically saying the same thing twice. I have marked the sentence that could potentially be removed with a strikethrough.

    Kazagg Chah: Before long, the seals holding the Voidgate shut will falter and fail. Your deeds speak of your determination and ability. I have learned all of you that I must.That the seal holding the Voidgate shut will falter and fail is beyond doubt. Yet your deeds speak of determination and ability, and in them I spy hope. I have learned all of you that I must.
    Edit: looking at it again, the three sentences I originally suggested to be removed actually sound nicer than the first three sentences. Just my opinion.
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    Last edited by CSLionheart; 03-18-2012 at 01:32 AM.