Is my character-sheet lore friendly/good?

[Princess_Cassandra]

I'm so happy to finally finish a little project I have been working on for the past several weeks, Lana's character sheet. I've quickly became a fan of FFXIV's lore and also happen to find the opinions of others very valuable but unfortunately, I have yet to make more than a few fellow lore enthusiast friends. Once more I would like to turn to these kind forums one last time for some reassurance and/or healthy dose of tough love!

This is a bit of a sequel to my original thread asking whether or not my initial Ishgardian concept was lore friendly. All in all i got some amazing feedback and I tried my best to incorporate a lot of what I learned into my project at some point or another. Due to avoiding unnecessary confusion because of some things I changed, I decided maybe it would be more beneficial if I made this thread instead of necro-ing the old one. I wasn't 100% sure so I went with this for the sake of clarity, sincere apologies if that was an error.


Does my character work and did I make any lore mistakes? And if you would be so kind, is it written well enough? p.s. still waiting for the glacial coat

Edit: Under Heavy Construction, Rewriting