That's already ways better.
Looks like there are a few things you'll handle better with a little more exp. Like medica II into assize which is redundant. Apart from that it mostly looks like you just need to optimize your uptime. There are quite a few instances of you shifting and moving about without casting anything. Again I think this'll come with experience. the feeling the need to top your tank too.
Also don't forget the power of largesse + regen + asylum.

I will say though, you really need to get out of the habit of using Cure I when you're full mp. That skill should be dead to you unless you really need to pay attention to your mana management.