Quote Originally Posted by Eloah View Post
I read your lore, and the moveset and have a few thoughts. For the lore, I feel you might of over thought the lore. I have an idea of how to interpret it, based on the Hildibrand quests. Based on your minions, you haven't finished the quest chain; surprise you get a minion, lol.

Also the concept for the moves has merit but to me feels somewhat disjointed. Granted I did gloss over it but from a few concepts I noticed, it looks like some mechanics are themed slightly differently than what you'd expect. Since we have downtime today, I might show you what I mean and share it with you, so you can see what I mean. But regardless of and feedback I or anyone else gives you, keep at these, flexing your creativity is never a bad thing.
Thanks for the feedback! So I will rethink the Lore behind the job a little bit later on, after work lol; I've done some minor adjustments to the abilities, and utilized more iconic reoccurring abilities / spells from the history of the Time Mage in the Final Fantasy franchise

For example, Light Arts is a new one, just to add a small uniqueness to its own merit, and I changed Omnipresence to Teleport.


Thanks again! Hopefully everyone looks forward to the new lore I'll present for the job, Time Knight / Chronos Knight =D