S8 SMN PvP Guide [Feedback wanted]

[BloodRubyXII]

Hey,

TLDR (since the guide is long enough) I tried to make a SMN guide since there's not much PvP content minus a healer guide from thana and a MCH guide from Lace that I can't find anymore. Could do with the feedback, I didn't really have much idea what I was doing and despite trying to edit it, was still quite long. Don't hold back, because I want to improve on this. Someone in WPD get Feves' attention for me pls.

Also volume warning, when I was watching it back I had my headphones on 30% so I didn't lower it enough in vegas lol.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fjjfCQ2rkK8

Errors I already picked up:
Called Bio 3 "Bio 2" instead when explaining abilities.
For some reason said Cometeor had an MS effect, it doesn't, it's increased damage taken rather than reduced healing taken.
I forgot Wither in the text explanation of generic SMN burst rush
My accent is actually disgusting I hate talking