As someone who particularly enjoys dabbling in these fictitiously created concepts, I don't particularly like this concept:
- I don't think Scythe is the right weapon for this. I get the notion of the Judge (but that doesn't fit with Fencer, change one or the other IMO)
- I understand that you like RDM, but it seems way too thematically and mechanically similar. That's not a good thing
- I gave pretty critical feedback on your BLU, that appears you didn't take it into account. You're overloading the concept with effects. You did the same thing on BLU (and I've been guilty of doing it in the past too). Keep the focus on fewer, but higher impact buffs
- What exactly is "void holy energy". That seems ridiculous to me lol. Light and Dark elements are usually either solo or supplementary to the natural elements, I don't think I've ever seen successful instances where dark and light (antagonist forces) work together
- Some of the naming conventions are decent, but some of them are pretty wonky (but then again, FF14 isn't good at this either IMO)


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