Better Writers

[fodare]

There's wayyyyyyy too much dialogue to have such stilted writing. You need to cut 50% of the dialogue, most of it is trite and redundant. It's gotten to the point where all I need is to listen to the first sentence, maybe two and then skip. It's twice as interesting, twice as fast and it doesn't sound like someone doesn't know anything about writing or Shakespeare. It reads like you're trying to make it sound more sophisticated, but don't actually know why people spoke that way.

On top of that, your "epic movie story" is mostly faux-tech-jargon and pretend politics, nobody enjoyed Star Wars Episode I for this exact reason. And the big bullet points of the story are just standard JRPG fodder - I was bored watching Omega get released. It's BORING.

Also, you should get people who actually understand how accents work. Clearly, none of you do. Also, try hiring at least one American, not everyone needs to be British.

Also, FF7 had better looking cinematics.

Also, casting more then one person to the voice for one character is beyond stupid. And extremely obvious since the performances aren't consistent. Your directors are amateurs too.