Need help with Bard Lvl 70 gear

[cgbspender]

Hey !

From a quick looking around, Critical Hit is obviously the go-to stat for Bard. I have tried to design myself a suitable gearset, and I could use some help from you guys to check it and tell me if it's right or wrong. My intuition says it's a bit unbalanced (slightly too little DH, maybe too much deter, slightly too little SS ?), but I can't say for sure, so....

Ah, and an important note is that I barely ever raid, and the only genji gear that I could afford are accessories as I never went higher than o1s. Also, for what it's worth, I can craft the 320 and pentameld it if that happens to be optimal.

http://ffxiv.ariyala.com/1428K

Thoughts ?

Thanks !