New DPS Job Idea - Time Mage!

[Ceallach]

I assume it's also a 15-yalm radius for Hastega? You didn't list that.

There are no squares to warp to in FINAL FANTASY XIV. You should probably rework Spacetime Parry.

Time Reversal is too strong. I'd replace it with something completely new.

You didn't put a range down for Slowja or Hasteja.

Consequence of Aging needs a radius. I'll assume it's 5 yalms for now, making it in line with most other area attacks we have.

With the trait, that would be 1.5 minutes on Timewarp, Slowga and Hastega, 22.5 seconds on Timed Slice and Spacetime Parry, 1 minute on Concern of Aging, Haste and Slow and 45 seconds on Time Shield and Future Sight. It's unclear if this trait affects Spacetime Warp. I'd recommend making the original recast for Timed Slice and Spacetime Parry an even number of seconds.

With how you have things currently set up, you only have Prophetic Blow, Prophetic Blow II and Prophetic Blow III in your rotation most of the time, with everything else being used as needed or on recast, depending on whether it does damage or there's a need for it. Because Prophetic Blow III is worded as if it guarantees the Armageddon Gauge going off, your rotation's going to be PB2, PB, oGCDs, PB2, PB, Swiftcast PB3 and basically nothing else unless the Armageddon Gauge goes off prematurely, which you stated there is a chance of.

Definitely consider a Back to the Future II trait for the rest of the recasts the job has. As it stands, some of the higher-level ones are nearly unusable.

[arctanx]

I assume it's also a 15-yalm radius for Hastega? You didn't list that.

There are no squares to warp to in FINAL FANTASY XIV. You should probably rework Spacetime Parry.

Time Reversal is too strong. I'd replace it with something completely new.

You didn't put a range down for Slowja or Hasteja.

Consequence of Aging needs a radius. I'll assume it's 5 yalms for now, making it in line with most other area attacks we have.

With the trait, that would be 1.5 minutes on Timewarp, Slowga and Hastega, 22.5 seconds on Timed Slice and Spacetime Parry, 1 minute on Concern of Aging, Haste and Slow and 45 seconds on Time Shield and Future Sight. It's unclear if this trait affects Spacetime Warp. I'd recommend making the original recast for Timed Slice and Spacetime Parry an even number of seconds.

With how you have things currently set up, you only have Prophetic Blow, Prophetic Blow II and Prophetic Blow III in your rotation most of the time, with everything else being used as needed or on recast, depending on whether it does damage or there's a need for it. Because Prophetic Blow III is worded as if it guarantees the Armageddon Gauge going off, your rotation's going to be PB2, PB, oGCDs, PB2, PB, Swiftcast PB3 and basically nothing else unless the Armageddon Gauge goes off prematurely, which you stated there is a chance of.

Definitely consider a Back to the Future II trait for the rest of the recasts the job has. As it stands, some of the higher-level ones are nearly unusable.

First of all, thanks for your substantial feedback. I appreciate it very much. I have addressed many of your concerns -- I have added radii to the moves you mentioned. Instead of mentioning squares, I changed the wording of Spacetime Parry to refer to a 1y radius around the target as the teleportation zone. If you have suggestions for Time Reversal, I'd be happy to adjust. The idea is I want to give Time Mage a niche move where they can reverse the clock on a target...is this a useful idea or no? Maybe if it didn't restore from the dead but merely reset the target 15 seconds in the past with its stats, that'd still be really useful. I gave the two melee moves even cooldown times to avoid uneven cooldown times. I lowered the recast times for many of the skills, and I may indeed implement a Back to the Future II trait. I updated the recast times so that the rotation is more than just PB1, 2, and 3, but more variety may still be needed here. I'll think over this. Any other feedback you can give is appreciated.

[Ceallach]

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There's a reason only tanks have actions that allow them to outright avoid death. There's also a reason for their high recasts. To give a DPS basically the same action would be too strong. If you want an action that "turns back the clock" on a player, I'd say give the time mage an inverted form of the machinist's Wildfire. Let's say it's a two-minute recast that gives a ten-second status to a target party member (not yourself or a pet). As long as that player doesn't die within that time, it keeps track of all the damage that players takes from all sources, then heals for that amount at the end of the ten seconds.