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  1. 08-05-2021 06:45 PM #1
    Iscah
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryldaun View Post
    [11:15]Udutai: Mayhap they will return to their mothers in time. Mayhap they will not. Mayhap you can help?

    3 times in one text xD
    But would you remark if they used "maybe" or "perhaps" in the same rythym?
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  2. 08-09-2021 03:01 PM #2
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    Most likely I would not remark it as much with words that are more common. But I think it is always good to switch it up a little bit. Every few lines a perhaps, maybe or mayhap. The way it is now you have mayhap in 9 of 10 lines in the main story.
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