Sorry, but how much thought did you really put into this rotation?

It also needs Shroud of Saints and Assize (for the mp). Even with Ballad, you'll have downtime thanks to the poor MP management of the original rotation. Further enhancement could be had from an AST if you have one, and you should also make sure the Bard uses BV.

While I appreciate your effort, please research these things more thoroughly before posting next time.