I made a guide for new tanks, explaining the basic concepts of tanking: any feedback?

[Exaccus]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWUcMjfnjY4

This is my first time making a guide like this, and this is specifically for new players looking to learn the basics of tanking.

If you think I missed something important or have any other feedback, please let me know!

Thank you!

[MPNZ]

My basic complaint is that it doesn't state the basic tanking rotation, and how it increases how many times they have to cast flash/unleash/overpower with each add (to a point). Which is "ranged pull" to AOE emnity 2-5 times (1+ every add after 3) to emnity combo while making sure to refresh the AOE after a period of time, or after every mob (singular) is killed. It might also be a good idea to mention something about spreading the emnity combo across multiple mobs to slow down emnity loss in situations that require it. It's something everyone has to explain at some point to newer players that is always skipped, or just not explained simply and frankly to them. Also, I feel as if the enmity chapter should have been the first lesson, IMO. If not, following an explanation of common skills, what they are called for each class/job, and required/recommended cross-class abilities. I hope this helps.