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    Player
    WellFooled's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2013
    Location
    Ul'dah
    Posts
    1,313
    Character
    Doranaux Wavemet
    World
    Goblin
    Main Class
    Gladiator Lv 80
    Quote Originally Posted by xanmoas View Post
    "Luminous Empire", Seeking recruits to help expand and grow our Free company together. We have Two Airships, Craft tables, Able helpers, Mansion. Please /tell for
    invite.
    If I can suggest, recruitment messages are just advertisements for your guild. Just like ads in real life, you need to make yourself stand out a little bit. Your recruitment message is nearly identical to 90% of messages out there. As truthful as it all is, you need something to set yourself apart. Humor is a great way to do that (after all, better to show that you're fun loving group than to say you are) or some kind of narrative. Some I've heard over the years,

    "You just wiped for the third time and you inspect your party. The White Mage is wearing crafting gear and the Paladin just asked you 'What's a tank?' Why punish yourself any longer? Join Luminous Empire today!"

    "Have you joined a Free Company in the past year? Did you read the fine print before joining? You maybe be eligible to upgrade your membership to Luminous Empire. No fees in the transition required. Terms and Conditions apply."

    "Tired of not being in the same Free Company as me? Join Luminous Empire."
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    Last edited by WellFooled; 12-10-2015 at 01:30 PM.

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    Gamer3427's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2015
    Location
    Limsa Lominsa
    Posts
    882
    Character
    Rashi Shadowblade
    World
    Shiva
    Main Class
    Machinist Lv 60
    Quote Originally Posted by WellFooled View Post
    "Tired of not being in the same Free Company as me? Join Luminous Empire."
    Not going to lie. That last one would actually get me to join if I was a player on that server looking for a FC.....
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    Quote Originally Posted by TouchandFeel View Post
    Strangely enough, if you assume the OP is from a parallel universe, it all makes sense.
    ...
    That or they are just spouting gibberish.