Ul'dah, Hall of Flames -- Text -- Lannis's Incorrect Comma and Capitalization

[Eemeefu]

1. The comma that follows "recruit" on the second is incorrect, as it implies that the player (Mermentia) is the only recruit.

Comma nixxed. Thanks for that.

2. The capitalization of "Flame" may be inconsistent with how this term is capitalized in other areas of the game.

When used in the context of the Grand Companies or their members, Flame, Serpent, and Storm are being capped. Unless the usage is in a metaphor, and maybe not even always then, we'll be going with the uppercase. I'm actually going to uncap Immortal in the above line–that's just weird.