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    Mermentia's Avatar
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    Limsa Lominsa
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    Mermentia Forevea
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    Siren
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    Thaumaturge Lv 50

    LL, Astalicia, "What a Pirate Wants" --Text-- Hasthwab's Missing Comma, Awkward Word

    When the player is aboard the Astalicia in Limsa Lominsa, is progressing through the "What a Pirate Wants" sidequest, and speaks to Hasthwab, the following text appears:

    "
    Hasthwab: Radz-at-Han reserve!
    Well I'll be, lads! Seems some folk
    in this town still 'as proper
    manners. Aye, I suppose I can
    tell ye what I know o' the
    Sahagin den.
    "

    This is incorrect for two reasons:
    1. "Well" on the second line is acting as an interjection and should be followed with a comma.
    2. "lads" reads awkwardly in this context, as he does not seem to be speaking to anyone in particular. He is not surrounded by a groups of NPCs, and the PC he is talking to could be female (and is, in this case).

    Please fix these issues by adding a comma after "Well" and by removing "lads" from the end of this sentence.

    The corrected text would read as follows:

    "
    Hasthwab: Radz-at-Han reserve!
    Well, I'll be! Seems some folk
    in this town still 'as proper
    manners. Aye, I suppose I can
    tell ye what I know o' the
    Sahagin den.
    "
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    Dev Team Fernehalwes's Avatar
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    Done and done.

    Thank you again!
    The fix will be reflected in a coming patch (post 1.19a).
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