What you are about to read is not an attempt to flame or start an argument, it is simply some friendly criticism.

You clearly spent a lot of time with the voice overs, which I thought were awesome! You had multiple funny scenes and had me laughing a few times! However I sort of felt like the video editing/time spent on voice overs FARRRR outweighed most of your scenes. A lot of them felt not very well thought out and by the time the scene changed I was left there thinking, "THAT, was the climax?!" or "Okayyyyyy" lol. Don't get me wrong, you definitely had some funny stuff! I just hope that you can improve on the jokes because you have some great video editing skills to make an ever better vid!

I have zero professional knowledge so I could be totally full of crud. This is just my personal opinion. XD