I think you forgot to put RI/Vengeance somewhere in your first opener text.

The second opener is brilliant and is something I haven't thought of personally. /like.

For MT, I open up with the same old unchained combo and drop defiance for FC instead of IB. So something like:

Unchained > Tomahawk or alternatively Tomahawk > Unchained > HS > [Brutal] > Maim > [Berserk] > Eye > [IR] > HS > [Pot] > Skull > BB > [Deliverance] > Fracture > HS > FC > Maim > [Brutal] > SE > Pacified