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    Edyth Angelheart
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    Arcanist Lv 100

    Compiled Heavensward Quest Diction and Grammar Errors

    1. Smells Like Team Spirit: Near the end of the quest, Hudde says "I've spent enough time nursing my wounds, and the hunt awaits Q'yantaa and I." However, the final word should be "me," because "I" can never be the object of a sentence, only the subject. [http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/words/i-or-me]
    2. In the same quest, in the cutscene where Q'yantaa eats chocobo legs, she says: "You kill without scruple, without respect, and without conscious." It should be "conscience."
    3. In a Vundu-related quest, Gunu Vanu brings a magitek hand to Aanu Vanu, and Aanu Vanu has two subject-verb agreement errors: he says: "For such a precious gift does Gunu Vanu deserves title of reverence. For as long as rising moon follows setting sun, tribes knows Gunu Vanu as "Gunu Vanu, Bringer of Shade."
    4. There is a scene in another quest where Tataru assumes the remains of the Scions were found in the Ul'dahn waterways, and she says "What? No! No you can't mean..." The comma between No and you is missing.
    5. Another comma is missing after the word me in Gildon's dialogue in a Sea of Clouds quest: "I am honored that you would think so highly of me Lady Lainaitte, truly I am."
    6. In Trouble at Zenith, the Ancient Vouivre says "You hath done well..." before engaging you in battle. However, it should be "Thou hast done well..." Even if you want him to say "You" rather than "Thou" for some reason, the verb "hath" does not agree with the subject "You." It needs to be "hast."
    7. In a Doman kiddy adventure quest in Mor Dhona, Shiun says "...or a vengeful spirits who was sealed away..." Spirits shouldn't be plural.
    8. In a scene in the Lord Commander's hall in another quest, Aymeric says "Master [Lastname], Master Alphinaud--I, Aymeric, Lord Commander of the Temple Knights..." The "Master" is incorrect for female players, and should be "Lady" or "Mistress."
    9. In the quest Breaking New Ground, Linette says "...you are serving one of the Ishgard's High Houses." The word "the" isn't needed.
    10. In the quest A Noble Purpose, Margyt says "Ask around the troops around the Convictory." The first "around" isn't needed.
    11. In one of the many moogle search quests, the Mazed Moogle says "A nasty gang of dragons attacked my companions and I..." Again, "I" cannot be used as the object of a sentence. [http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/words/i-or-me]
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    Last edited by Edyth; 07-12-2015 at 11:52 AM.