When the player begins the "Traumaturgy" sidequest and observes the first entry of the Journal, the following text appears for the first two lines:

"
Prelate Totono informs you that the Order succeeded in tracking down the Amalj'aa
warband that kidnapped the novice Theda and securing her safety. Traumatized by
"

This seems to read awkwardly because the word "securing" on the second line does not match the phrasing from the previous line, "the Order succeeded". In other words, it seems as though the Order did (past tense) two discretely different things: "succeeded in tracking down the warband" and "secured Theda's safety".

In order to make this read less awkwardly, please consider replacing "securing" on the second line with "secured".

The suggested text would read as follows:

"
Prelate Totono informs you that the Order succeeded in tracking down the Amalj'aa
warband that kidnapped the novice Theda and secured her safety. Traumatized by
"

Steps to Reproduce:
1) Start the game.
2) Accept the "Traumaturgy" sidequest from Totono in the Thaumaturges' Guild.
3) Open the Journal through the Main Menu.