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    At a quick glance, things that stood out to me that made the original post haphazard and confusing.

    1) The title, Mastapiece, does not really have anything to do with the post itself and provides no initial context for people reading the post for the first time.
    2) You immediately went into a stream of consciousness of proposed solutions without first, or really ever, going into what the perceived problems were that would be solved by your solutions. Again, its a context thing. By first talking about the problem, context is provided for the solution.
    3). There was a lot of usage of nebulous pronouns, without a lot of clarification on what those pronouns were meant to be or represent. The intent of them could be guessed, but when so many are used in repetition, it quickly becomes confusing as to who or what you are referring to.

    As for people pointing out the grammatical weak points of your post, try not to take it too harshly, unless they are directly and clearly insulting you.
    In order to give a clear and understandable proposal or topic of discussion, they must be presented in a clear and understandable manner, otherwise people may not get the points you are trying to make.
    Also, how an idea is presented greatly affects how the idea will be taken by people. If the time and consideration was not taken to properly present an idea, people tend to assume that the same treatment was given to the idea itself and will often not take it as seriously.

    As for the ideas presented, for the most part I agree with the points and opinions of some of the other posters, that the ideas you proposed would actually cause more problems than what it would potentially fix.
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    Last edited by TouchandFeel; 02-26-2015 at 05:58 AM.