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    AntiRivet's Avatar
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    Kaz Vahara
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    My band's new track: "Heavensward". Ishgardian Symphonic Power Metal!

    Hey guys, did a new track entitled "Heavensward" with my band. We usually do League of Legends music, so this is a fun departure from the norm. Please check it out.

    http://youtu.be/UbktuEmNeG4
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    Prepare yourselves for a Kaztastrophe!

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    Awesome! Should do some more.
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    Dervy Yakimi
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    Those vocals are pretty sick.
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    Dajabant Ancalagon
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    This is absolutely fantastic.
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    Milmoko Gemoko
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    Think SE just found their title track for the expansion
    Thats pretty damn good man
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    Indaki Sativa
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    I'm pretty particular in the metal that I like.


    This is really sick! Awesome job guys, I'll be showing this song to many more people
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    Estelomo Claustrada
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    I'm not one for scratchy aggressive tones in music. I'm too sensitive for that, makes me feel like I am being yelled at. D: That said, this is a wonderful song, the parts without the scratchy aggressive tones especially. Metal is just something I have to get used to, I suppose. I think the fault lies with me, not with your band! Excellent, excellent, and even more excellent.

    Oh, and I pretty much expect more from you on the FFXIV front. That's an order! Give me a metal rendition of Gridania/Twelveswood. Why? BECAUSE THAT WOULD BE AWESOME, THAT'S WHY. And because, as I like to say: 'Till Forest Shrouds All!

    ...And then you can move onto Limsa and Ul'dah. One song for every city. :3
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    I thought it was pretty good, and I enjoyed listening to it. I always enjoy hearing some Latin vocals in songs, especially like "Rise of the White Raven." The Latin in this song, for the most part, portrayed the idea you were probably going for, but it could use some work, even though many people probably do not care about it or understand it.

    For instance, it would probably be better to use the accusative case of a noun instead of the subjective, except where the noun is used with a preposition or verb. This is commonly how interjections are formed.

    Secondly, make sure your verbs agree in number with their subjects, e.g. "ceciderant heroes" instead of "cecedit heroes." To be even better, it is usually preferred to use the verb at the end of the clause, e.g. "heroes ceciderant." Furthermore, to be even more super-picky, the pronunciation would be more like "here-oh-ace" than "here-ohs." However, I do admit that these changes would make this line more of a mouthful.

    Thirdly, be careful with your noun cases, such as in "deus ventus" and "caelum terrore." In the former phrase, you just have two nouns in the subjective, but I think you mean "god of the wind" or "wind of the god," in which case one of them should be genitive: respectively, "deus venti" or "ventus dei". The latter phrase would mean something like "sky with terror," but the construction is awkward. If you meant "sky of terror," you should try "caelum terroris."

    Fourthly, make sure your adjectives have the same gender as their nouns, e.g. "sancta terra" instead of "sanctus terra."
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    Last edited by Myvar; 02-13-2015 at 12:03 PM.

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    Ugh, thank god for good symphonic power metal. I've exhausted my supply, so this is good.

    More please
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    When the lyrics started

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