An Introduction to Dragonspeak

[Viridiana]

This was clearly a case of someone (Fernewhales) attempting to be cute and doing more than what was called for and I'm sure that he will likely be reprimanded for it and told to refrain from this type of behavior in the future. There was simply too much material left out in his translation here or left to speculation and it is completely unacceptable.

Hahahahahahahaha

Oh, wait. You're serious.

Edit:

. . .not completely re-written to the point that it egregiously leaves out at least 3 major points that Midgardsormr expressly conveys in the Japanese (aka Parent version of the story) text.

I'm curious what you think was left out. I bet it's there.