Solracht, good job on the table, look very interesting and a fun system, moreover it sticked with the traditional name, although it kinda butchered the lore a little(ie. lancer to dragoon the dragon knight, a bit far fetched in my opinion). And its not too hardcore of a system since they only need rank 20 jobs which take probably a week to level. Although I find the dragoon part a bit too lancer(can t find a better phrase) probably add more jobs archer or marauder for example.

Moreover, since SE is going to kill the lore with the reintroduction of traditional names, might as well make a more fun system then we can think about a new lore or modify the current one (some gladiator become paladin for example).