My top three
1. Ciara: Great action pose, interesting lighting, and we can see your face. My only critique is that your a bit too centered.
2. Kurri: Great pose and expression, very good use of battle effects, and good use of rule of thirds. My only critique is that I wish Ramuh was a little more present.
3. Jayzan: Great action shot, nice angles, good use of rule of thirds, and we can definitely see your boss. My only critique is that I wish I could see more of you.

The others
4. Tinsely: You're shot is very similar to Jayzan's. The only reason I chose his over yours is because of the glow effect makes it hard to tell what's going on. I do like the chocobo in the foregrounds.
5. Yunie: It's cute but it's just not an interesting shot... >A>()
6. Maxwell: While I like the dynamic pose, the picture is very muddled. I couldn't tell the difference between you, the boss, or the scenery.