The Evening Star tavern

[Moggedion]

The Evening Star tavern:
To all Eorzean rp'ers out there, Legion Of The Dragon on the Diabolos server has opened up our own tavern out of our personal FC house. Anyone is welcome to come check us out we are in the lavender beds ward 3 plot 23.The following paragraph is a post of my character I.C. shouting in the town square of the 3 major cities advertising us for those of you in-game if you see me and would like to chat just wave me down ^.^ you can also check out our official FC website at dragonxiv.com Ty all and please enjoy the following scene.


The Evening Star is now open to the general public! Come, sit a spell in our luxurious tavern/inn and chat with fellow adventurers like your self. Have a drink or meal from the bar; specials change daily. Need to wash off the dirt and grime of the world? Take a relaxing dip in our private spa! Conduct your dealing in our private back rooms or lounge on the couch with a relaxing book for a time. We have nightly dancers and musicians. Need to rest a spell before you continue your journey? Rent a room to rest for the night. Cheap rooms/suites available. Every night's stay comes with a free meal. Come, brothers and sisters, set the troubles of the world aside for a night and enjoy youself!

(Free daily special if flyer presented to receptionist a door)

~sincerely: Moggedion Moonhunter
Barkeep/Tavern wench

[Moggedion]

[BillyBones]

You know, punctuation is important. Especially if you like to RP.
I like your idea but the post is really difficult to read. A few commas, periods and exclamation marks would make it much more enjoyable.

[Moggedion]

Yea my original post on the lodestone is much longer, but when i tried to post it here it told me I had to take characters because it was too long. I will try to edit it and fix the problems

[MomomiMomi]

The Evening Star is now open to the general public! Come, sit a spell in our luxurious tavern/inn and chat with fellow adventurers like your self. Have a drink or meal from the bar; specials change daily. Need to wash off the dirt and grime of the world? Take a relaxing dip in our private spa! Conduct your dealing in our private back rooms or lounge on the couch with a relaxing book for a time. We have nightly dancers and musicians. Need to rest a spell before you continue your journey? Rent a room to rest for the night. Cheap rooms/suites available. Every night's stay comes with a free meal. Come, brothers and sisters, set the troubles of the world aside for a night and enjoy youself!

Did the best I could. Take it or leave it. Also, I think the / comes across as odd in speech.

Pretty nice idea.

[Moggedion]

Thank you all for the help. I will start to pay-attention to it more before I post.

[Ecks007]

I'll be honest, I didn't know we even had RP'ers on our server.

But good luck with the idea.

[MomomiMomi]

No worries. Thanks for sharing. Sorry if it came across as rude or anything. Wasn't intended that way.

I'd check it out if it was in Behemoth. As it is, I doubt I'd ever get around to checking it out since it's on another server.

[Moggedion]

We have a few rp'ers in our FC itself, but want to try to branch out to any Diabolos players that might be out there.

[Moggedion]

Not rude at all. I really should check more often before I post lol.