Jayzan-seriously, you nailed it.
S.Q.-nice modeling shot. I'd like to see more of your body in your pics though.
Yuni-lovely shot.
Yunie-too cute!
Kaeleh-cute!

Jayzan-seriously, you nailed it.
S.Q.-nice modeling shot. I'd like to see more of your body in your pics though.
Yuni-lovely shot.
Yunie-too cute!
Kaeleh-cute!

1. Vahn
2. Yunie
3. Jayzan
4. Kaelah
5. Ronberku
I'm considering trying out for Cycle 3 as well.



If this was aimed to me, I had to rush my response and I was very tired and I usually would give more in-depth feedback..that and wellVoters please be aware: Models have feelings. They all put a lot of effort into their shots. So, any criticism, please make it constructive! A model has expressed their hurt feelings after feeling like people just give them negativity with no reason why.
Example of criticism: I don't like it.
Example of constructive criticism: I don't like it because... I think if you had done... it would be better. You could do... to improve. or I'd like it more if...
Thank you. ^-^ & thanks for your votes.
I don't really have anything to say because I pretty much liked everyone elses shot, so I had to pick and choose really hard and almost all of them.
So sorry if I hurt anyone's feelings. .-.



No no don't feel targeted~ I think the model in question meant from all rounds not just this one.If this was aimed to me, I had to rush my response and I was very tired and I usually would give more in-depth feedback..that and well
I don't really have anything to say because I pretty much liked everyone elses shot, so I had to pick and choose really hard and almost all of them.
So sorry if I hurt anyone's feelings. .-.
Please don't stop being "harsh" lol we like to know how to improve is all, so be honest, but tell us why you don't like it. :]
Thank you very much for your comment. :3 I did actually plan to unequip the hand accessories but forgot to do it when the time came haha, the tank got impatient and started pulling. (I had no friends available at the time so did this in a pug.) So I couldn't re take it. xD
Last edited by Kaelah; 09-12-2014 at 11:28 PM.
~Quit moping, get hoping~
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1. Yuni - Overall it's a great shot...background, pose, and attire. I thought it fit the theme perfectly..good job!
2. Kin - Nice choice of casual attire and colors...it blends well with your surroundings. Making good use of the emote to block the sunlight shining in your eyes (from the proper direction) is a plus.
3. Valentina - Nice background view of the caves. You did well to showcase the other beautiful scenery of Hullbreaker Island! The outfit was nice too! (Blue is my favorite color!)
4. S.Q. - Great coordination of gear and colors! It made the background colors more vibrant. Facial expression shows heightened awareness of your surroundings, ready to take up arms if necessary.
5. Ciara - Beautiful blue eyes to match the colors of the surrounding blue water. Good choice of attire and natural colors...a good fit for the occasion.

Vahn - Loathe as I am to vote for someone who is responsible for my getting knocked out () this one is my favourite. The story is clear, and staged beautifully.
Jayzan - I was expecting to see a bunch of /lookout emotes in this round, but yours is the one I like the best. The staging of the shot says to me that the wreck just happened and really communicates the feeling of "Where in the seven hells AM I?"
Maxwell - This one got my vote for being more creative that a standard /lookout emote - the combined hands and facial expression work wonderfully to communicate the confusion going on.
Tinsley - A very different story, but one I like! This screams to me of a noblewoman on a ship who got wrecked and is just INCREDIBLY excited about that.
Ciara - It was a toss up between two that stood out for me, yours and Kurri's. I agree with Genesis in that the eyes really stand out here - the viewer's eye gets naturally drawn to...well, your eyes.
Truth be told, I was underwhelmed by this weeks pictures. >//n//>()
1. Yuni
2. Yunie
3. Kurri
4. Vahn
5. Kin


Kaelah
Kin
Kurri
Vahn
S.Q
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Ciara
Kaelah
Maxwell
Jayzan
Kurri
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) this one is my favourite. The story is clear, and staged beautifully.




