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    Limsa Lominsa
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    Character
    Mermentia Forevea
    World
    Siren
    Main Class
    Thaumaturge Lv 50

    Limsa Lominsa, Musketeers' Guild -- Text -- Mynadaeg's Missing Serial Comma

    When the player is starting the "Shot Through the Heart" sidequest and speaks to Mynadaeg after accepting the quest, the following text appears, in part:

    "
    escape of sorts. The Bloody
    Executioners, Kraken's Arms,
    Sanguine Sirens, Salthounds and the
    rest—all of them give the smallfolk
    an excuse to dream. But dreams of
    "

    This is incorrect because a serial comma is missing on the third line of quoted text in-between "Salthounds" and "and".

    Please fix this issue by adding a comma after "Salthounds".

    The corrected text would read as follows:

    "
    escape of sorts. The Bloody
    Executioners, Kraken's Arms,
    Sanguine Sirens, Salthounds, and the
    rest—all of them give the smallfolk
    an excuse to dream. But dreams of
    "

    Steps to Reproduce:
    1) Start the game...
    2) Blah blah blah... This isn't really all that important =P
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    Dev Team Fernehalwes's Avatar
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    Thanks, as always for the report, Merm!

    The serial comma has been added, and the wrath of middle school English teachers, Chicago Manual of Style editors, and QA testers quelled.
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