Quote Originally Posted by Catapult View Post
I can sound really critical, can't i? My overall impression is that this looks good and I kinda want to try my own hand at this again. Which would mean collecting footage... >_<
I prefer that kind of criticism. Thanks.

As an important note, my hearing is not so sharp as to catch things like the bells you mentioned. In fact, you could say I've some very profound hearing loss (this is an actual clinical term for "Deaf"), so what I did, was what I could hear with my decades-old hearing aid.

Also, what I was trying to do was imply that there was a ages-old story with my character, Feral Ren. She has quite an interesting backstory.