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  1. 04-13-2015 06:47 PM #1
    starLivitation
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    Quote Originally Posted by Terrini View Post
    I'll try to give some constructive critique for you Levi...
    The action of this shot is nice, but some elements that make it a weaker shot are the framing and the heavy helmet on your head leaving your form lacking even the expression of hair from the backshot. If you had locked onto the target (Numpad 5 on
    ah ty, it seems i don't have the decication required for this lol. i was at least hoping to be one of the contestants then i would learn more about this thing, but i really don't think i want to try again for cycle 4, i thot i try my luck there and see how this works. lol.
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  2. 04-13-2015 11:17 PM #2
    AdamFyi
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    Quote Originally Posted by starLivitation View Post
    ah ty, it seems i don't have the decication required for this lol. i was at least hoping to be one of the contestants then i would learn more about this thing, but i really don't think i want to try again for cycle 4, i thot i try my luck there and see how this works. lol.
    Nah, I wouldn't say that your shots were bad. They were good considering it was just an audition. Anyway, the only thing I can tell you is that your shots have a lot of negative space which isn't favourable for you because you were applying for the YouTube Cycle and were up against a lot of vets that are familiar of how things work around here. Don't take it too hard, one bad critique isn't the end of the world. People just have different tastes and opinions.
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  3. 04-13-2015 11:18 PM #3
    Pooky_Bear
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    Quote Originally Posted by starLivitation View Post
    ah ty, it seems i don't have the decication required for this lol. i was at least hoping to be one of the contestants then i would learn more about this thing, but i really don't think i want to try again for cycle 4, i thot i try my luck there and see how this works. lol.
    You never know until you try ^^ This is my first time ever entering in ENTM and I got into the YT edition. Practicing taking and viewing your shots every so often will help you improve. I'm hoping I can keep up with the other contestants cause a lot of them are already vets at this!
    Even if you don't make it you'll learn something and can always try again <3
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