OFFICIAL Eorzea's Next Top Model Discussion Thread

[EorzeasNTM]

Everyone's pictures were great. Unfortunately I could only take 14 Models + Koriander. If you really want to be involved in ENTM you should audition for Cycle 4!

(Note: I also commented that it was okay you used a cut scene for your close up since this was just auditions. In the real contest cutscenes are not allowed.)

[Terrini]

I'll try to give some constructive critique for you Levi...

battleshot: ( while lvling ! was durring the dungen, not the best view of my char but its me, i promise ! there is some battle effects! )

The action of this shot is nice, but some elements that make it a weaker shot are the framing and the heavy helmet on your head leaving your form lacking even the expression of hair from the backshot. If you had locked onto the target (Numpad 5 on the keyboard) you could have had an off-center shot at least.

scene shot: ( out side my house, i like hill view! )

Even though it's a "Scenic" shot, that doesn't mean you should be de-emphasized! Front and center like you are with most of you out of the picture is very underwhelming. You want to OWN the scene and add to the beauty of it using outfit choice and pose! Some scenics can have benefit from getting a friend to take the picture for you in first person mode so you can have an off-center shot.

[starLivitation]

I'll try to give some constructive critique for you Levi...
The action of this shot is nice, but some elements that make it a weaker shot are the framing and the heavy helmet on your head leaving your form lacking even the expression of hair from the backshot. If you had locked onto the target (Numpad 5 on

ah ty, it seems i don't have the decication required for this lol. i was at least hoping to be one of the contestants then i would learn more about this thing, but i really don't think i want to try again for cycle 4, i thot i try my luck there and see how this works. lol.

[AdamFyi]

ah ty, it seems i don't have the decication required for this lol. i was at least hoping to be one of the contestants then i would learn more about this thing, but i really don't think i want to try again for cycle 4, i thot i try my luck there and see how this works. lol.

Nah, I wouldn't say that your shots were bad. They were good considering it was just an audition. Anyway, the only thing I can tell you is that your shots have a lot of negative space which isn't favourable for you because you were applying for the YouTube Cycle and were up against a lot of vets that are familiar of how things work around here. Don't take it too hard, one bad critique isn't the end of the world. People just have different tastes and opinions.

[Pooky_Bear]

ah ty, it seems i don't have the decication required for this lol. i was at least hoping to be one of the contestants then i would learn more about this thing, but i really don't think i want to try again for cycle 4, i thot i try my luck there and see how this works. lol.

You never know until you try ^^ This is my first time ever entering in ENTM and I got into the YT edition. Practicing taking and viewing your shots every so often will help you improve. I'm hoping I can keep up with the other contestants cause a lot of them are already vets at this!
Even if you don't make it you'll learn something and can always try again <3

[Terrini]

This thread needs a bump...

[Spy]

lol I opted for not doing the forum one as well. The YT is going to be enough work as it is xD

[EorzeasNTM]

The 15 models cast in YT2, Adeline, and myself are in a group skype chat now, so forgive the lack of posting here. Once Cycle 4 starts, the ENTM Threads will be more active I'm sure.

[Terrini]

We have to keep SOME suspense as to what we're all madly taking pictures of before the beginning of the cycles... Yargh! I wish that I could just do so much, but I'm fairly broke ;-; Some items are out of my reach to finish outfits. And then there is getting just the right shots... So much suspense! So much pressure! I need to be AMAZING because the competition is FIERCE!

[AlexionSkylark]

Waiting here patiently on news about Cycle 4...

*twiddling thumbs*

la la la...

*whistles*

mmm...