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  1. #1
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    May 2011
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    Mermentia Forevea
    World
    Siren
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    Thaumaturge Lv 50

    Journal, "Sniffing Out a Profit" -- Text -- Incorrect Comma and Extra Word

    When the player starts the "Sniffing Out a Profit" sidequest and observes his Journal after speaking to Ahldskyf, the following text appears on the second and third lines of the entry:

    "
    Orion captain, Ahldskyf finds himself in a proverbial pickle. As he cannot leave the
    city, the captain has asked that you to help him by traveling to a small settlement
    "

    This is incorrect for two reasons:
    1. The comma that appears after "captain" on the first line is unnecessary and creates an awkward pause.
    2. The word "to" that follows "you" on the second line of quoted text is erroneous.

    Please fix this issues by removing the comma that follows "captain" and by removing the "to" that follows "you".

    The corrected text would read as follows:

    "
    Orion captain Ahldskyf finds himself in a proverbial pickle. As he cannot leave the
    city, the captain has asked that you help him by traveling to a small settlement
    "

    Steps to Reproduce:
    Start the "Sniffing Out a Profit" sidequest.
    Open the Journal through the Main Menu and observe the text that appears.
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  2. #2
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    Solid 2fer, Merm. The changes have been made and are in the barrel for the next patch. Thanks!
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